The world of work is changing rapidly. Employees should be able to depend on the same job or same working condition for a long time in the near future.Discuss the cases of rapid change in world of work and how people can be prepared for the future?

Essay topics:

The world of work is changing rapidly. Employees should be able to depend on the same job or same working condition for a long time in the near future.

Discuss the cases of rapid change in world of work and how people can be prepared for the future?

In ever-changing world, it becomes easier to get employed in any job place with having better job skills. Thus, most employees do not prefer to work for a long time in a specific field job. Where there are several reasons in which way working style is changing, which will be further explained in following subsequent paragraphs.

Nowadays ie become trend to get sufficient experience in any one job sector and apply for the higher position in another company. Because in earlier days we needed to get the full academic study of whatever we want work, but here we have experience ourself for a limited period in work can leadds to placed in other company. Second, if we cannot feel satisfied ourself in the job place, we may have chances of transferring our job place. Owing to peer pressure on employee and unusual atmosphere can create trouble for them, thus they can enabled themselves to work in other place which is suitable for them.

The main aspects of work will be change in the way of presence of workers. Like, most of work will become dependent automatically so manual work will be ignored. So every human being is ready to face technical world in which everything will be handled by pressing one button. Thus people must have to attend gym or yoga classes can help them to stay fit and healthy. Next, people must aware about the computer knowledge which will be available in every parts of the world, so employees need to work from home without visiting field area which is far away from the living area. For instance, in Google headquarters every workers doing their job in limited space as a basket. So, CEO of company has been laid out a big improvement in the company as they provide every facilities which can entertain them and feel relaxed whole time. Which always be in favor of betterment of employees and society.

By the way of conclusion, the working method in the job place is changing over the period which will definitely be healthier development for a better lifestyle. Where every human being should accept working movement which will be in front of them.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'enable'
Suggestion: enable
... create trouble for them, thus they can enabled themselves to work in other place which...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 838, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...them and feel relaxed whole time. Which always be in favor of betterment of employees and...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ier development for a better lifestyle. Where every human being should accept working...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ovement which will be in front of them.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, thus, for instance, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77197802198 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48565957082 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9679396501 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.176470588 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336900993282 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123423519709 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064348089427 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233959572294 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408923925801 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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