Write about the following topic.
Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary world where unimaginable inventions have been introduced to daily life, which eventually led ease of work to mankind. Now-a-days these little technologies are being included in almost every aspect of human life and some often consider this to be dominating over our daily needs and activities. Despite having some disadvantages, but they can be overlooked by its huge advantages.
In our homes, human are now provided with televisions, internet and telephone technological services which leads to the awareness of the whole world, to the particular person sitting in his home. For instance telephone was a great breakthrough, which removed the distance barrier for the information to travel around the world. Once, I had to convey some crucial information to my far sitting family member but the telephone service of my area went down, and felt completely helpless, that is when I realized how badly we humans are dependent upon the technologies we are now surrounded by. This availability of information in just one spot without any hassle also leads to obesity, laziness and some gadgets also releases harmful rays which can also leads to diseases.
Workplaces of human are now loaded with these technological advancements like intranet, high performance computers for designing and overseas video presenting. Although, this advancement leads to the subtraction of hand skills to most of the people but these can be overlooked if we consider the results, as these technologies led to this production of various cutting edge products in almost every field whether it is to travel, build, eat or sleep etcetera.
To summarize, there are some disadvantages to this, but not major if we compare them to the advantages of information technologies. If humans were not capable of inventing them, life would be much more difficult and unaware of surroundings.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30100334448 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05777815916 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1017306433 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.090909091 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159962095145 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614855138197 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456588113271 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878897354888 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334472113567 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.