Write about the following topic:
It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Many people argue that taking risks is crucial in terms of both professional and personal aspects. In this upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both sides and elaborate on this more in detail.
On the one hand, making risky decisions may bring us harm, especially when individuals do not consider them thoroughly. Risks come with unpredictable events therefore it is apparent that we can get into troubles without knowing possible solutions. This cause us an immense amount of time and effort to tackle it. For example, when a company launch a new product which they have never sold before, they can struggle finding customers. This is due to their current consumers may have scepticism over a brand new item.
On the other hand, high risk may result in spectacular reward. Firstly, it grants us numerous opportunities to achieve our goals. For instance, if a person tries to get in shape, he can consider taking a new sport which will appear to be time-consuming and require intense practice but eventually, he will reach his goal to be healthy and fit. Secondly, taking uncertain actions encourages people to challenge their own abilities and make a breakthrough. When a person get into a different area of profession, he can discover his real strength and thrive on success. In contrast, if he is extremely stable and avoids trying something fresh, he can never make a profound development.
In conclusion, risky decisions undeniably play a vital role in a person's professional and personal lives. For that reason, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to find'.
Suggestion: to find
...ve never sold before, they can struggle finding customers. This is due to their current...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12355212355 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92555577319 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0688231025 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192284540948 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652450336879 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691828337873 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128184163838 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437006833866 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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