Write about the following topic.
Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are many people prefer work for a company or organisation, maybe they’re afraid of taking risks or bunch of problem happen when they start their own business. Those who disagree, however, decide to build their own business instead. They believe that the benefits of running a business can outweigh the drawbacks.
Initially, we should know that running your own business can lead to various jeopardy. Beforehand, become a business owner carry the heaviest responsibility. Decisively, you have to do multi tasks such as business planning, staff managing, accounting or marketing. This actually make you exhausted and aggravating. Moreover, because of your main responsibility, you’ll have to work harder than anyone else to reach your success and get profits, you almost work continuously and soon it’ll harm your health quickly. Inspite of working so hard, you still have to face against tons of prospect like ambiguity income inconstancy or your business don’t work well and bankrupt.
In contrast, being a boss got it own numerous advantages, one of them is job satisfication. Obviously, you start-up cause you have your knowledge about it, your passion and and enthusiasm, you know what you have to do and got your own plan to beware any trouble. Furthermore, you can do everything freely without forcing yourself to obey other’s command. It’ll give you the flexibility and opportunity to making choice, scheduling, deciding. You are the owner it’s mean you’re the boss, so no one can complain what you did. You can freely work whenever you want, do whatever you like. You can openly set your business’s objective, which you see is most suitable and you can customise it at anytime base on your employment’s performance. Other asset is the fact that you always earn more money than your employees, cause you’re an employer. Exclusively, when the business blooms, you can even make money without doing anything.
Generally, even though running a company mean you’ll face against risks and perils, many people out there, including me, still think that the welfare it bring are much more huge and worth for people who take risk. Sortly, I’d like to self-employed because when I overcome those challenges, I’ll get a set of benefits as maximum growth and optimum learning, which make me an all-rounder.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...e your knowledge about it, your passion and and enthusiasm, you know what you have to d...
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Line 5, column 606, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...henever you want, do whatever you like. You can openly set your business's obj...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...ing me, still think that the welfare it bring are much more huge and worth for people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, in contrast, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33156498674 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98410020627 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59151193634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1755667631 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203845952559 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738588735825 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688439897454 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166624523045 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10868191043 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.