Dear Professor,
I’m writing to ask for a one-day leave on the 24th of March which is the next Monday. Actually, one of my friends is going to have a surgery on his eyes so he needs somebody to take care of him for a few days. Since his operation is on Friday afternoon I can spend 3 days with him and taking care of him. After these 3 days he will put off the bandage and we'll see.
For keeping up with my working schedule and for completing the working tasks on time, I’ll overwork this week. This way nothing will postpone to a later time and we’ll follow our schedule.
Last not list, don’t hesitate to contact me in case of any emergencies in my absence. You can call me via my cell phone 0915….
Thanks in advance for your cooperating
Sincerely Yours
Rahi Honarvar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 147.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48979591837 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43299773845 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707482993197 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8138750513 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212297247397 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756197099863 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475899968564 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103164215978 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370182512712 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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