Nowadays, youngsters are suffering from various problems to get job opportunities because of competitive era. Sometimes, other age group also affect from this. I think that it will be solved to take some appropriate steps. Therefore, i will discuss my view points in up coming paragraphs.
To commence with, these days, job's opportunities are limited. In another words, competition of getting jobs for earning more and more money to fulfill their dreams, and nowadays, every companies want to accurate and better emplyers to progress in order to that they choose youngsters because they think that they have proper information as well as knowledge related to modern gadgets which is extremely helpful for their industry's success. Owing to this, multinational firms able to use new techniques of progressing. Secondly, old people want to take jobs in any industry after having retirement in any particular field. Old people have less knowledge and ideas as against to young generation. As a result, teenagers get more jobs as compared to older citozens.
On the other side, I deem that every person has a right to get job in any field sans any difficulty. In other words, we cannot judge to someone to see his apperence and age. So, companies had better to give equal opportunities for getting jobs. Apart from this, grey hair people have much experience of work because they already did work, related to any sector. Furthermore, government should increase job vancies for old age group. Which is immensely beneficial for them because, if old people free at their home after retriement, then they will feel loneliness and stressful, nowadays people live far from each other because of job and education purposes. Thus, if old masses do job, then they will lead a healthy as well as happy lives.
To sum up, it is clear that youngsters are future of every nation but, I firmly believe that older citizens also have right to get job in any field due to their experience which will helpful for their coming time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, i think, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9881305638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65596040741 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0668123784 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3888888889 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143504434395 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527447034041 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457040195832 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901999427302 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303127282661 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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