Young people in disturbed economies tend to become violent causing distruction to life and property. What the the cause and solution of this problem.
Money plays a significant role in humans life as it helps to fulfill the basic needs of the life. It is undoubtedly the case that do the reason for violent attitude of young people is money?. In this essay, I will examine the possible reason for this trend and suggest some of proactive measures that authorities could implement to curb this problem.
The first step is to understand why is this happening?. Broadly speaking, there are two main reason for this. The first and foremost is unemployment. Despite of being well qualified, people do not get any job and there is immense pressure on them created by their family as when their family members demands for the money fron them which results in frustration. For instance, the recent survey conducted by the Times of India across the nation asserts that nearly 70% of engineers are unemployed in our country.
Apart from all that, the second main reason for this trend is unnecessary desire of people. The person do not have much salery to afford product and they push their limits just under the peer pressure of their friends and to satisfy their ego. For example, the recent survey conducted by the tribune in Punjab asserts that about 60% of people do not to lead good life after retirement as they they spend their all of money to fulfill their desires when they are younger.
There is certainly no one solution for this problem gives complexity of this cause. However, one option is to do the councling of people regarding how to manage the expenses. Secondly, government should take initiative to provide employment to people who are well qualified.
To conclude, there are number of reasons for this problem like unemployment and desires. While it may not be possible to find the complete solution of this, this could probably be solved by the councling of People.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, broadly speaking, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86031746032 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47538448421 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0269987002 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153576059403 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573105065363 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452450300825 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101454624253 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530567466958 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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