Young people find it difficult to communicate with older people
why is this
what are the solutions
Does the widening generation gap increasing the communication barriers between young and old people? as a matter of fact, more often than not, it is observed that younger ones find it hard to talk with the aged ones. While this problem stems from the changing social and cultural needs of young people, if remedial measures such as making teenagers realise the value of older people in their life are taken the issue could be contained to quiet an extent.
Arguably, in the western countries younger people do not live separate from their parents and grandparents for no reason. The major factor responsible behind this practice is there different perspective of thinking. In fact , aged and young individuals could have various ideologies on a same concept, owing to which differences are increasing gradually, and consequently they are ignoring each other and do not prefer conversation. Another factor is the dynamic social and cultural values. For an example, indian people used to live in expanded families, but no sooner did they adopt the western culture in their life, than families became nuclear. Due to this distances increased among children and older people and they hardly meet each other to communicate.
Notwithstanding the severity of the problem, it is certainly not without its solutions. one key solution to mitigate this gap is that young and aged people should spend some quality time with each other, which in result would not only help to remove the communication gap, but also provide them an opportunity to understand each other. indian history is a witness to the good relation of old and young people with each other which describe that children spent almost major part of their time with their grandparents which never allowed communication barriers. this practice is needed to be followed in this era in order to remove the hesitation of conversation between olds and teenagers.
To conclude, but for any doubt, it is asserted that although the change in thinking pattern on the same concept gives a birth to communication barriers among the old and new generation ,yet the spending of valuable time with each other could remove this gap. However if teenagers and aged people try to understand each other's perspective with respect, it would eventually lead to socially stable and morally prosperous society; lest good outcomes should be far out of reach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, while, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12020460358 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70095602955 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544757033248 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.56367558 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.466666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28956730336 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939865342112 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638223602176 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186974625145 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561022326299 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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