Cyber-bullying and cybercrimes are seen to be on the rise today. What are the causes for this? What are the solutions for this problem?
Nowadays, we must face a variety of threats from real life to the internet. This essay will closely examine two significant issues that happen continuously on social media platforms: cyber-bullying and cybercrimes. We should explore the causes and finding the solutions to deal with problems.
What the causes of cyber-bullying and cybercrime? Firstly, the rise of internet users has been increased dramatically. The active accounts in the well-known social platform such as Facebook, Instagram, or Twitter are plenty from teenager to older, that make the internets not different from the mess. As a result, the difference in age, culture, education, and perspective make cyber-harassment happen easily. For example, if we will see someone with black color skin, blonded dark hair, have opposite the standard of beauty in our culture, the first thing we do is typing negative comments to judge their appearances. This inadvertent judgment is cyber-bullying. Moreover, online communication encourages people to act aggressively or prompt them to do things they would not dare to try in real life. The ability to reach more people and the always-on culture of the internet mean that cyber-bullying can have even more detrimental effects on the victims than conventional playground bullying.
The question that is rising here is how to tackle these problems. First of all, we should consider the role of government. The governments have taken legislative actions and enacted strict laws. For the cybercrime side, each individual should study how to protect private information, computer or network. Moreover, we must take suitable security measures and be alerts and aware of important ways to prevent cyber intrusions and online crime when connected. Take a look at the cyber-harassment side; we consider blocking the bully and formally reporting their behaviors on the social platform itself. In addition, we could reach out to the security and privacy department of social platform companies to seek help. We must actively collect evidence, images, and offensive words to demonstrate that we are victims in all processes.
To sum up, the causes of cyber harassment are the complication of internet users, online communication, and the always-on culture of the internet. To deal with these, we should protect ourselves, take the right measurement, and with the involvement of government or authority
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44504021448 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09936964363 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584450402145 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6720113557 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183494613135 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061594141687 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976833355885 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103607971378 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488766950639 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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