people have little understanding of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world?
Nowadays, people have a tendency to neglect the important role of the natural world. This dereliction of duty has had an adverse impact not only on the fate of the biodiversity but also on humans' living conditions. This essay will discuss the main reasons that cause human ignorance toward environmental issues and the solution to tackle them.
Firstly, the lack of ecological educations in the educational system. The school curriculums put much pressure on developing knowledge about the theoretical subject and exam-related skills. The teaching contents rarely dip deeper into the natural world which surrounded the student's life. As a result, the progress of maturation of children lacks understanding about mother worlds, which definitely create a careless attitude toward natural habitat. Secondly, technological advancement is considered to be another culprit. Because of the benefits of the technological revolution, people rarely have opportunities to connect with the natural world. Everything lies in the small smartphone; with some clicks, the natural habitat will be seen beautifully and wonderfully on the screen. Those things make people lose their interest in picking up their backpacks and explore the natural world outside.
What can we do to deal with the ignorant attitudes of humans towards nature? First of all, the redesign education system is a necessary method. We should give our students more chances to have an in-depth understanding and explore the natural environment. Running a campaign about nature conservation in schools or celebrate extracurricular environmental activities is a feasible solution. Moreover, the government should promote the importance of the natural world by stepping into environment awareness programs in the influential solution domain. For example, the authority should encourage the film studio to produce a documentary related to natural environmental problems. It is beneficial for raising citizen awareness.
To sum up, nature is an essential element of people's life. The matters as mentioned above have a positive effect on our mind. We should change our attitudes gradually and take action to protect our natural environment issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65558912387 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06995321997 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.460336865 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7619047619 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389063604836 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101642287403 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100304940013 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212619682807 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531502145304 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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