Some people suggest that the increased sale of famous consumer goods in the present scenario clearly denotes that people buy them largely on account of the influence of the commercials irrespective of their necessity. I tend to agree to this view. Do advertisements have such a great deal of power on consumer behavior? This essay will discuss the reasons with examples in detail.
Not surprisingly the offers and discounts on consumer goods such as furniture, household appliances play a huge rule on consumer's purchasing behavior. Especially, attractive credits offered during festive seasons are more popular. For example, cash back, price discounts, free products are some of the few modes of trade design used by the sellers to attract buyers to induce the buyers to spend more money on these durable goods, sometimes beyond their purchasing power through EMI or credit cards.
Despite their necessity people at times purchase popular brands just out the curiosity created by the luring advertisements.
For instance, a case of a poor or middle-class man replacing a normal color tv with the LED TV on seeing the ads in the newspaper. Likewise, some will purchase a high-end smartphone though they can carry out their regular duties with their middle-end smartphones efficiently. As result, buyers are spending a huge amount of their savings on products that are not really required, ending up with debt obligations and not to mention the risks of over usage of credit cards.
In conclusion, the advertisement has a significant part in the rise in the sale of consumer goods and it also lures customer to spend on the products that are not their absolute needs. I believe this as not a positive trend, as it results in inefficient spending on the common man making him a debtor. Unless customer puts efforts to make himself or herself aware of the purpose behind and effects of the luring commercials, the businessmen will use all possible means to make cash out of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06402439024 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79422519721 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4919311517 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.642857143 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11145485894 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423860012458 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468518333747 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597702291003 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390788100242 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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