9. Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whilst some people believe that being a teenager brings a great deal of happiness rather than being a responsible mature, others are of the belief of the opposite view. Although adolescence years might be happier because there are almost no responsibilities, I do prefer adulthood as it brings more freedom in terms of one’s financial and social decisions. This essay will discuss both sides of this debate thoroughly before a reasonable conclusion is reached.
The teenage years are often seen as the most exciting period of many people’s life simply because of fewer responsibilities and more freedom. This is to say that a teenager, unlike an adult, usually does not have to care about paying bills, proving himself at work, or competing with other businesses’ owners. Definitely, these factors do contribute to a less stressful life and often lead to a sense of fulfillment and happiness amongst young people. A recent survey conducted by “ Family Care Organization”, on 200 British families, has revealed that 80% of teenagers were found to be extremely glad and satisfied about the way they live their lives, while the percentage dramatically decreased to 25%, when it came to their parents’ satisfaction.
On the other hand, many people, including myself, may think that being a grown-up is far more rewarding because a person gets paid and even the sense of accountability either at home or work, for many, is positive and enjoyable in itself. In addition to this, many individuals do passionately enjoy looking after their loved ones, and they never consider this as disadvantageous. For example, while I was a child, I frequently asked my parents to travel to Europe during the summer holidays, but they refused due to either lack of monetary resources or their irrational strict parental control. Nevertheless, after I graduated, I got a well-paid job, and since then I have been visiting numerous countries during my annual leave.
Having presented the aforementioned ideas, it can be concluded that although there are many merits for the teenage years such as the absence of work or family-related constraints, being self-independent adult can bring more happiness because the advantage of independently making one’s financial and social decisions.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34065934066 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19544586725 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9491411446 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199525922683 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681032276119 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618944492473 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116312111341 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570530597381 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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