Adults do less exercise nowadays. Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy lives through sporting events such as the Olympics or the World Cup. Others think that there are better ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Majority of people now a days are leading a sedentary lifestyle. Due to the hectic lifestyle, adults do not indulge in physical activities. Few believe that in order to motivate people for exercising is through various sporting events like Olympics or World Cup, while few people opine otherwise. This essay will discuss both the views with examples.
Firstly, people are leading an inactive life due to plethora of reasons like chaotic work schedule or personal commitments. Working professionals on average spend 9 hours a day work and due to the tight work schedule they have very little motivation to spend another hour in gym. To illustrate further, recent research by Hindustan Times states that 80% of working professionals have erratic work schedule and after long day nothing motivates them to exercise. Furthermore, research also states that sporting activities like Olympics or World cup are viewed as pure entertainment, hence there are very people who get inspiration by the athletes to exercise daily.
On the other hand, I believe that there are better ways to motivate people for physical exercise like the government can motivate people by running various campaigns for healthy lifestyle and the benefits of it. For example, India Prime Minister Mr. Narendra Modi has launched “Fit India Campaign” where he personally encourages the people of country to stay healthy and fit by doing regular exercise. In that campaign he shared his video of doing yoga on daily basis. Statistic shows that many people got motivated after seeing the prime minister video and have started doing any kind of physical activity. Alternatively, even corporates can motivate their employees to stay healthy by providing subside gymnasium memberships or provide exercise facilities in their offices. This will encourage people to work out on regular basis.
To recapitulate, staying fit and to exercise on regular basis requires lot of discipline and motivation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40967741935 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80252042055 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0501185789 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23817284746 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754876296575 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573670932101 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127772227426 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822643414026 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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