Advantage Disadvantage Essay Consumer goods have become the most important part of people s lives Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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Advantage/Disadvantage Essay
Consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Consumer goods are focus of people to make their lifestyle comfortable and stylish. While some think the trend is a boon for the economy and society, others are not in favour due to health and social issues it creates.
The proponents of the idea believe that it is a symbol of their social status,at the same time need of the hour. For instance, most families have both partners have to step out of home for work and do not have enough energy left to cook daily owing to long working hours. Home appliances such as refrigerators enable them to keep cooked food fresh a longer period of time. Henc...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at it is a symbol of their social status,at the same time need of the hour. For ins...
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...them to keep cooked food fresh a longer period of time. Hence, contributing positively in mana...
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... routine in families. Another factor is, one can impress the society and make a s...
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...mple, having an expensive car will boost one's social status and flaunt it i...
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...status and flaunt it is an achievement. On the other hand, overdependence on con...
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... social and health values. For instance, these days many are observed glued to th...
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... are observed glued to their smartphones and ignoring negative effects of it. It ...
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...s own benefits and ill-effects. However, if we can take some steps to do physical...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05323193916 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84045942536 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.056726129 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917871256331 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265376544651 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340343801557 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510620792403 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181265752193 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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