With the advent of the internet increasing number of people are shopping online what issues arise from this and how can they be tackled?
Over the last years the internet has made it in our daily life. it is no surprise,therefore, that purchasing has also experienced a transformation as a steadily growing number of people have been profiting of the possibilities offered by online shopping. The aim of this essay is to weigh the pros and cons of this new trend.
Regarded as one of the most remarkable breakthrough of the last century, the internet has become a constant tool in our routine. What once seemed to be impossible, it is now commonplace: without leaving home, it is possible to order items from all over the world, book hotels in fur-flung destinations, checking the bank account, and all that in a matter of seconds.
Especially when it comes to shopping, traditional habits have witnessed a decisive change of direction, so that a wider number of customers prefer nowadays to purchase items on the internet. this trend is quite easy to comprehend: thanks to globalization, buying items from far countries has become more affordable, price and expedition fees have dramatically decreased. All that, combined with fast and cheap internet connections has led to an increase in online shopping wiht overall beneficial effects on the economy. online stores are cropping up at fast pace and traditional stores have been adapting to the new trend. Major concerns revolved particularly around traditional stores which initially seemed to be on the verge of extinction and not capable of withstanding the unequal competition of large internet companies like Amazon or Ebay.
Surprisingly physical stores have endured the initial wave of change and customers seem to appreciate them more than online based shops. Many reasons play a role in shaping this feeling: first of all, buyers can rely on a physical store they can easily get into in case items need to be fixed. Secondly, no online shop will never able to provide trust and fidelity only traditional store can do.
In conclusion, online shopping has become reality in the last years bringing virtually only benefits for customers, who can count on low prices and fast delivery times, as well as for local shops who can open their products to the rest of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05769230769 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90366161161 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2506126872 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25276900266 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747901156325 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386663909463 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123323886658 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276619944863 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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