Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday's life. Is it a positive or negative development? Write an essay of minimum 250 words.
Invincibly, Commercials have been proved as a powerful and lucrative way to proliferate the reachability of the product s to our contemporary society from last two decades. Advertisements are becoming part and parcel of today's life. This essay will discuss its both pragmatic and unpragmatic blooming and explain why its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Our newfangled societies have always seems to get benefitted from these unrelenting advertisements. Firstly, it helps people to know about latest amenities and products in the market to stand a higher chance of flourishing their lives. Secondly, with profusion of product announcements, Employment prospects are also blossoming for eligible proponents. People like cartoonist, painter, director, editor, sound mixer can get jobs. Also illiterate person such as hoarding painter also got chance to make their ends meet with this kind of activity. Certainly, Advertisements is an optimistic way for both developed and fledgling nations to improve their economic as well as chores prospects for their citizens.
Contrastively, Advertisements also develop gloomy things for the public. To commence with, Due to high investments done on commercials; products prices are apparently high. So for impoverished or deprived citizens' its become out of reach to get those products and this conditions are even becoming deteriorated. Secondly, People buy these products even they do not need this just because this advertisements done by their favourite sportsman or film-star, they have urge to get those products. However, one can stop himself from buying those amenities or products if they can survive without them.In addition, some adult hoardings or commercials which can be inappropriate for children are also imparting pervasive messages for them.
To recapitulate the aforementioned views, this essay discussed both optimistic and pessimistic development of advertisements. I do surmise that it is a positive development for both public and its manufacturers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...ments. Firstly, it helps people to know about latest amenities and products in the market to...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ctor, editor, sound mixer can get jobs. Also illiterate person such as hoarding pain...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...even they do not need this just because this advertisements done by their favourite ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...oducts if they can survive without them.In addition, some adult hoardings or comme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76254180602 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30802200507 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1468091342 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0882232084747 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378966618347 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485680997384 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662888858448 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279809518801 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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