Advertisements are influencing us in a negative way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Adverts persuade people in a bad way. I completely agree with that statement because it sways potential customers to buy more than they require and also gives misinformation.
One reason why people are being persuaded by ads is the fact that it convinces the users to buy unnecessary items. People often get manipulated by the alluring TV commercials and advertising agencies falsely make them believe that their every product is crucial to run their routine work. As a result, people tend to buy such items even if they are readily available at their home. For example, a recent survey by the Times magazine showed that about 90% of existing iphone users have upgraded to a newer version of the phone just by watching its persuasive ads.
Another reason why adverts negatively influence people is that it usually gives false information to its viewers. This is because the main aim of any advertising campaign is to sell more to its customers, regardless of the quality of the product. Consequently, such ad agency does not consider the ethical part of selling and thus misguides the users by giving non- genuine information. For instance, an H and S shampoo company’s ad shows re-growing of hair on a bald person’s head within a few days of its use, which in fact is impossible according to dermatologists.
To conclude, there is a negative influence of commercials on people because they convince people to purchase extra items as well as give wrong information about the product. In future, Governments will have a higher control over these adverts in order to stop their misconduct.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
Adverts persuade people in a bad way. I completely agree with that statement...
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ve wrong information about the product. In future, Governments will have a higher control...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02621722846 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91760540018 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1929266057 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0707198306518 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281896321909 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317903785201 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476367695599 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191652989712 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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