Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one.
Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Today we are living in the era of consumerism and advertising plays a role of catalyst to flourish it further. advertisements have become an indispensible part of our life and we came across many each day. In my opinion, I consider that the way advertising trend has gained momentum in last decade and influenced our daily life is matter of concern for the society.
On the one hand, some people are convinced that advertisements provides us with lot of positive information like new products available in market, recently opened places to visit and also aware us about the upcoming opportunities. To elucidate this we can take example of new smartphone launched in market advertised through T.V. commercial, newly opened restaurant or amusement park advertised through pamphlets of brochure and newspaper advert from private or government agencies on various job openings in different sectors. Moreover, if we look from the business perspective advertisements plays an imperative role to raise the bottom lines and take it to new heights.
On the other hand, it is often believed that advertisements put detrimental effects on our society and I agree. one accepted fact about advertisements is that it tempts people to buy unnecessary products that they do not need or would have not purchased if did not get too much influenced by these advertisements. Another serious issue is that many times companies exaggerate their product capabilities in commercial in order to captivate consumers interest. it is later when buyer realizes that he did not receive what he was promised makes him feel betrayed.
All in all, while people may vary in their opinions, I believe that many companies use these advertisements to trick and deceive the consumers. At the same time it makes people obsess to buy irrelevant things which can be consider as wastage of money and resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16393442623 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05241147328 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632786885246 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5564336591 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23091752539 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793041197002 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536665671478 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129414517928 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485758588401 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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