Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people around the world are fascinated towards history and are convinced that it is equally important to explore this field as others, whereas, few argue that studying it brings no good to society and is simply unnecessary utilization of resources and time. In my opinion, history plays a vital role to cascade plethora of knowledge to future generation and must be learnt with complete interest.
Firstly, supporters of not studying the history would argue that this subject is all about past happenings, world is changing at rapid speed and we must focus on what future has to offer us through new developments and researches rather than looking behind and contemplating the past issues. However, I don't comply with this thought because this subject let us know our roots, from where we evolved and how we progressed as an individual or as in group. Moreover, it is due to history only that any country can hold its intrinsic value of traditions, customs and culture.
This brings me to my second point, people often say that learning history is boring. One has to remember so many dates and events. Well, this may be true to some extent that remembering long list of dates could be a tedious task but it also challenge our brain to elevate memory power. In addition, I would like to stress on our great leaders who had sacrificed their lives for us, they made valiant efforts for independence, betterment and upliftment of society. Learning history teaches us how they fought injustice and are really a source for inspiration for all of us. Some of the example of these great people are Bhagat Singh, Queen Lakshmi Bai, Rabindarnath Tagore and many others that we can't count.
All in all, I believe field of history may not provide the brightest career prospects but still can be considered as the filed of great knowledge, adventure and unrevealed mysteries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, still, well, whereas, as to, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90880503145 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62258306497 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2790292794 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113205997708 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415625699785 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346856125042 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063814810893 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352688146599 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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