Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work. So which do you think is the best way to choose career.
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Choosing a correct career path determines how individual's future would be like. Some choose wisely by following their innate interests while others do perfunctory review and choose according to designation and remuneration offered. In my opinion, choosing a career is an imperative step and deciding what to do that makes your work enjoyable fosters growth.
On the one hand, people who generally choose their profession according to salary primarily focuses on earning money, becoming rich and to live luxurious life. Certainly, earning more is not bad but if it is the sole purpose of life then we won't be able to enjoy the motive behind earning that money. Also, some people choose their profession to prove their status in society to others. It is often seen that these people are not satisfied with the work they do and at certain time of life regret their decision later. Interviews conducted by financial express in 2018 on job satisfaction reveals the bitter truth. Around 67 percent of employees in market are not satisfied with the work they do, but still they continue on same road as some feel it is too late to switch their roles and it would be hard, whereas few other argue that pay scale in their preferred profession is low than what they are already earning.
On the other hand, there are people who have passion for something and they choose their profession accordingly to suffice it. I stand firm with these people, they also have greater chance of being successful than others. There are certain things that can not be purchased through money and happiness certainly qualifies for being on top of that list. Doing what you love not only gives you satisfaction, sense of achievement, happiness but also ensure that the end result of your work will be of premium quality as you put your efforts with complete dedication. In todays' era quality work is much appreciated and in demand, may it be any field or sector. If you are good at what you produce, people from around the globe will look out for you to work for them.
All in all, I believe just following blindly the status symbol and ending up feeling despondent later will not bring any good. Instead focusing on creating your own status with what you can do best brings immense satisfaction and pride.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...others do perfunctory review and choose according to designation and remuneration offered...
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Line 5, column 763, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will look out for you to work for them. All in all, I believe just following bli...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...spondent later will not bring any good. Instead focusing on creating your own status wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, may, so, still, then, whereas, while, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82442748092 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4616502553 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567430025445 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5505194401 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.529411765 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341250972842 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104179890452 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740666232754 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203062036161 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881777731397 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.