Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work.
Which do you think is the best way to choose a career?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has been argued for quite a long time whether people should pick their jobs on the basis of pay and public reputation, or according to their interest. However, while I believe that people should choose their professional career as per social dignity and better wages, I also think that they should look for employment, which gives them pleasure during working at the office. In this essay, I will provide further reasons with strong pieces of evidence to support my statement.
To start with, in this modern era, social dignity and better wages are essential for each and every citizen, because it provides a special image to people in society. Earning a good amount of money could be helpful in bearing all personal expenses such as paying rent, health-related expenses, and buying grocery items. The public reputation is helpful in gaining considerable respect as well as a respectful status. Nowadays, there many positions in the job market considered as respectful jobs for example doctors, engineers, and teachers.
On the other hand, many people still believe that choosing a profession of our personal choice is more enjoyable and pleasant. Children take dream during their childhood to achieve a high post in the future and they work hard to get it. If they are able to achieve their childhood goals then they would feel cheerful and happy, because they have earned what they wanted to. In other words, they will enjoy working in the area of their interest, which was their dream since childhood. School students, for instance, choose their stream during school or college time and decide what kind of jobs they would like to do in their adulthood or future.
To sum up, social status plays an important role in building a good image on peers and other people. Similarly, earning well could be helpful to buy costly items like luxurious cars, house, and clothes, which present you as a wealth person among others. But, choosing a job as per our interest could give us pleasure and happiness.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, similarly, so, still, then, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, in other words, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95266272189 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43354300928 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600591715976 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5877631903 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4666666667 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269252635986 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780576252762 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624755941211 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146481455266 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772431678755 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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