Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life.Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one.Discuss both views and include your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advertising is an integral part of people's lives today. There are many different perspectives on advertising. Some people believe that advertising has only some negative aspects, but others say that advertising has had a lot of positive effects on their lives.I will state my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Nowadays, there are ads everywhere we look at life or anywhere in the living environment. It is as if advertising has become part of human existence.Advertising has many negative aspects. First of all, many people are tempted to see ads and buy items that they don't need or that they haven't purchased what they want.For example, they order a red dress while the outfit they wear is orange or different in size.New ways of advertising are so deceptive that they persuade people to buy, even if they don't need it. Especially when it comes to toy advertising, when parents are forced to buy by the pressure of their children and are financially pressured.
It is true that advertising has many disadvantages. But it can also be mentioned in this article.Nowadays most of the advertising is happening on the internet like Instagram and telegram.Looking at ads, people have many options to choose from and can compare a device and buy it at the best quality and at the cheapest price.On the other hand, we get into advertising with things we didn't know about before.For example, different methods of treating blurry teeth that make people aware of these techniques not only increase their scientific knowledge, but they can also choose the best treatment.
In conclusion,I think the advantages and disadvantages of advertising are equally that with more awareness and research on their products, the best choice can be made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09760413096 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.695260587 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.3 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20417369426 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984865513354 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894026488775 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12909886932 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888857421219 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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