advertising is influencing people more and more. Is this positive or a negative trend? Give your own opinions and examples.
We are constantly surrounded by adverts, from television commercials, billboards to posters on the roads. People have distinct mindset about the effects of advertising on our lives. In my viewpoint, there are both positive and downside of advertisement.
To begin, there are two main reasons why it could be argued that advertising has numerous benefits in our lives. Firstly, commercials play an imperative role in the economy. Companies need to tell customers about their products and services. Advertisement informs us about the choice we have and the use of the product. For instance, Kellogg’s cornflakes have a variety of flavors for different range to offer for different age groups and for people want to lose weight, thus giving consumers different choice to select from.
Secondly, advertising is a creative industry that employs many people. Therefore, providing ample job opportunities and income for many people. So, without advertising, there would be a higher unemployment rate. To illustrate, a recent survey carried out by one of the leading ad agency in India suggests that creative jobs could get a major hiring boost in coming years ahead, as jobs for advertising and promotions are expected to grow 10% through next year, faster than the average for all occupations.
Nevertheless, some critics argue that advertising has an adverse effects on children. One problem is that advertiser often aim their marketing strategies towards the young age groups. Children, for instance, can easily be influenced by ad campaigns. So this put additional burden on their parents to buy them certain products by nagging and pestering. Beside this, children may also tend to have lower self-esteem if they believe themselves to be inferior for not owing the various product that are advertised, specially if their peers and friends posses these items.
To recapitulate, there are convincing arguments both for and against advertising. However, I believe that advertising have more positive effects on our lives such as social and economical aspects and I recommenced that publications should be regulated and controlled which aimed at children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45400593472 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00228408501 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637982195846 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.320730124 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7368421053 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12131784469 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339413604042 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031813588244 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685541460195 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256045008809 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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