Some people believe that people should follow common manners of dining and greeting when following visiting foreign countries. Do you agree with this view.

Essay topics:

Some people believe that people should follow common manners of dining and greeting when following visiting foreign countries. Do you agree with this view.

A lion’s share of society thinks that individuals should follow good table manner while eating and meeting people particularly when exploring overseas nations, however the rest go averse it. I am completely accord with this above statement. The following paragraphs would highlight my personal perspective with an apt examples.

To embark, I see eye to eye with the central idea for various reasons. First and foremost, good manners alway makes for good impression as culinary habits and cultures are different in each nations. Hence, it can be very helpful to know how people abroad expect them to behave in public and having basic understanding of culture and eating habits can help avoid awkward misunderstandings for people. To exemplify it, in many western countries people used fork and knife while dining-out while most South Asian continents people used traditional method of eating with their bare hands.

Furthermore, while exploring overseas learning basic rules and gesture of that country does not take much efforts as implementing them in practice will rewarding as it touches every aspects of life. Consequently, one should respect culture and traditions of foreign nations in order to be accepted in too that environment and feel important part of it. For instance, in India younger one wait for older people to finish dinner before cleaning table just to show politeness toward seniors and feel proud of their rich culture and tradition.

To sum up, while exploring foreign destinations, people should show some etiquette and table manners in order to be accepted as a part of their culture and traditions.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32307692308 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77575087128 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.888312071 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207189478093 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744654553282 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536205872485 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134730872606 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626133501478 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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