Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable to say that, technological advancement in the entertainment field has changed our lives completely. Large sections of society have opted to watch movies on their smart phone than going to a movie theater, however, some sections of society still believe that it is exciting to watch movie on wide-screen cinema hall. The following paragraphs would shed light on both approaches before making last note on my perspective with suitable example.
To embark with, the first and foremost reason for enjoying a picture on electronic gadget is that it saves lots of time. The majority of people are busy in their hectic life and commuting to their work station, thus, it is very difficult for them to take a moment out from their busy schedule and go to the movie house. Hence, it more convenient for them to watch it online on their smart phone as it save time and efforts. For example, a recent survey in India indicates that 90% of youngsters prefer to watch their favorite flick on their digital phone than going to a multiplex.
On the other hand, some part of society advocates the latter part as it is more reliable and better way to enjoy audio-visual effects of movies. Consequently, it can enhance the joy of watching cinema on wider screen to experience special effects which cannot be possible on small screens of mobile phones. As a result, audiences will feel the thrill while at various scenery and sound effects of films. To illustrate this, in India, sales of 3D film tickets have increased in the last few years as compared to earlier years.
To sum up, I opine that it is a totally viewers choice to watch move on cell phone or electronic gizmos to save time and effort or to enhance the special effects on a wider screen and fill the thrill and having life long experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75632911392 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55845574555 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0074282989 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113263122981 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368961120407 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284417459217 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610427365569 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035700104924 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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