some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is commonly believed that it is only authority’s responsibility to conserve the environment, however, some people think that each individual must play their part in looking after the natural surroundings. In my opinion, I think that individual role as well as government active involvement is necessary to take care of biosphere for a better future.
On the one hand, central and state government play a major role in taking care of environment by introducing new legislation in order to mitigate environmental issues such as air and soil pollution. Government has sufficient power to control factories and impose law against the industries for making environment safer. For instance, in India, there are a strict emission norms and penalties for industries which cross emission limit and strict automotive regulation. Besides this, another prominent role government could play would be creating TV programs and adverts to educate citizens and to persuade them to care for nature. Being informed to the consequences of their activities, individuals may encourage to alter their ways, to avoid harming the environment.
On the other hand, an individual could play a significant role towards making our environment safer by not using an enormous amount of plastic in our daily life, which is a hazardous pollutant of the soil. For instance, almost every consumer uses plastic while shopping, and there is always a use and throw culture. Instead of doing this, each person could opt for eco friendly alternatives such as using paper and cloth bags instead of plastic in the supermarkets. Furthermore, an individual can help in protecting environment by opting to take public transport for commuting to the workplace instead of driving private vehicles, it not only reduces the traffic congestion but also reduce carbon dioxide emissions and saving energy for the country.
To conclude, in my view, I completely believe that everyone should join hands with the regime in conserving nature and wildlife and, therefore the government and the citizens both play a vital role in environmental protection.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 713, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'altering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: altering
...r activities, individuals may encourage to alter their ways, to avoid harming the enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38554216867 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03074318735 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7969147476 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4166666667 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247530538532 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819561185312 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440197150597 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144827206844 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432244724085 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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