Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The environment is drastically changing and its protection is the major concern. Although, Some people hold a debate on whose responsibility is it to protect the environment, government or individuals? In my opinion, both are equally responsible for saving the environment.
Firstly, Governments have different authorities and resources to keep up the balance of nature. While developing, any city, town or industry many trees are being cut down to create infra for the people who are going to live there; So the environmental departments of that area is responsible to plant more trees to compensate the green cover which they have reduced. Additionally, the development of different industries lead to pollution problem at different levels such as water, air, and noise pollution, so different measures should be taken by higher authorities to control the level of pollutants.
Secondly, the government can only manage things at bigger levels so it is the individual's responsibility to maintain the balance in the local area and remote areas. For illustration, an Indian 42 years old man from Kerala named Joseph, restored 23,000 acres of land which was turning into a desert due to deforestation, by planting thousands of trees he refurbished that land become forest again and help different animal species to live in their natural habitats. So individuals should try to plant more trees around their habitat and try to keep the city clean to minimize the pollution and maintain the balance of nature.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the Government and individuals both play a vital role in helping the environment flourish. They need to work hand in hand to create a better atmosphere for the future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24014336918 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07632552381 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7184868853 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202306427184 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901410097567 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071919460488 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144236899961 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103036579523 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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