Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Essay topics:

Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

The export of fruits and vegetables through air transport has increased gradually to unfertile countries and to those places where the season is finished. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages will be discussed.

Supply of basic food to the countries which are unable to harvest for their own is compulsory as the human body and its organs needs these items to live a healthy life those who can't afford by plane use sea transport which is time taking but U.k and U.A.E is an example of using this service most often as they are unable to produce by their own. it plays a very important role for them as they can get everything they need in less time as compared with the ships and they are able to enjoy all the seasonal and unseasonal natural fresh fruits and vegetables for their people.

The biggest disadvantage is they have to pay too much amount by means of Taxes, planes, and other services. but due to far place, they are unable to use sea cargo which can be half or lesser than the amount paid for air cargo and can get more as compared through-plane because ships have more space. Another issue is that due to all this process things which are purchased very cheap get costly due to the services being availed.

I truly believe that it plays a vital role in exporting the goods in a faster mode so every person of that nation can enjoy the benefits and taste of that fruit and vegetable which their land is unable to produce and makes there life happy and healthy.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55925925926 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28965886606 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0266884686 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.875 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.75 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295686073394 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135339518282 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978053863594 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199858006095 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150954887367 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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