Of all public transportation options, a metro is the most convenient way to get around a large city. Do you agree or disagree?
Transportation infrastructure plays a vital role in the development of the city. Increasing population has resulted in a overburden on the commute facilities, but on the other hand, the metro has proved fruitful for society convenience. I agree that the implementation of the metro system in the city has raised the efficiency of travelling and its ability to blend with the modern infrastructure has resulted in a positive outcome.
Firstly, the fare and time required to travel in the city when compared to other transportation techniques, the metro is economical along with its modern equipment as an added advantage. For example, the two corners of Mumbai city which usually takes approximately three hours on the road or local train can be covered within two hours in the metro. Furthermore, the infrastructure is fully air-conditioned, the commuters can travel conveniently even in the hot sunny climate of the city. Thus metro is the best option to travel in the city at fair prices.
Secondly, the infrastructure developed is above the ground surface or below the ground level, which is why it is feasible to build stations in the crowded city. As it can be seen that, the space occupied by the development of metro stations does not affect the space of the existing building, and can be constructed in the city with not much ground space requirement, nevertheless, disruption of the existed structures are not required. So the development of metro stations is beneficial for society development.
To conclude, after analysing the situation it is not hard to see that the metro is the cheapest and most reliable mode of transportation in cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11397058824 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21054832803 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8186106331 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16219982583 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650519033503 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409196132549 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101450029121 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355015857942 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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