Although more and more people read the news online, some people still use newspaper. Why do you think this is? Which one do you prefer?
There are two main ways to read the world news, the online and the media, these days. Although following the news via newspapers is not really common in today life, some people are willing to read newspapers. It appears that reading the news online is more convenient and environmentally friendly. I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, the online news is more accessible thanks to technological improvements such as the Internet, smartphones, laptops, tablets, and computer systems. Individuals have easy access to the latest news via their personal devices. In other words, people do not need to leave their homes or workplaces to buy a newspaper. They just need to connect instantly to the Internet which is possible everywhere and read the news. In addition, a second and perhaps most significant reason for reading the online news instead of newspapers is to prevent deforestation. For instance, the types of paper which are made of cut-down trees by paper manufacturers. Therefore, the ground will be a place without forests over time. An alternative such as the use of the Internet to read the news will be extremely useful. As a result, the world would be a place in which nature will be saved and the paper product will be minimized. It is true that some people such as the seniors are not able to use the Internet and computers as well as youngsters. Thus, they have to read the news via newspapers.
Although following the news online could be much more time-saver and instant, most of the news on the Internet could be fake and subsequently unreliable. Therefore, If I have to choose a way to read the latest news I will prefer the traditional way the so-called newspaper because of its reliability.
To conclude, both approaches to follow the news have their own upsides and downsides. the use of the Internet for activities such as reading the news is not really reasonable even though It provides comfort and the nature saving. It seems to me that reading newspapers are more preferable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89766081871 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82560397501 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485380116959 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4309090789 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255286232089 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823965737949 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478185779535 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166361379713 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447708488709 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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