Although there are more and more women police officers in reality, are they really suitable for this job?
Women forces are increasing day by day in all over the world. Appointing more female to the police department and other armed forces are good idea . They obviously fit for this career. In this essay I shall going to discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is no doubt true that women and men are equally rubbing shoulders in almost every spheres of life.Women are very responsible when to come to any difficult situation as well as they know how to handle the obstacles. For instance a survey conducted in United States, they found that women are more intelligent as opposed to men. They noticed that, they are fast and quick to find the culprits of May crimes. Thus people want to choose more female than men in every field.
In addition, illegal acts are skyrocketing every nook and cranny such as female trafficking, juvenile delinquencies . In this case female forces are much suitable as they can easily app rich a girl or a child. Moreover female victims are more comfortable with women police officers. In fact men are not calm and quiet than women as a result girls fails to express their problems. To illustrate sufferer of rape cases could go back to the normal emotional state after the proper counselling and good attitude towards them by the female police.
In conclusion , women police forces exhibited their talent in every aspects of life. Obviously female have the skill to solve problems in this field as men do. However, many women stronger than men both physically and mentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84732824427 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50739312672 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0009982528 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.375 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270699287558 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909423293252 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685318327101 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165191150741 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468566665571 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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