Animals should not be used for the benefit of human beings, unless there is evidence that the animals do not suffer in any way. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Using animals for the benefit of human beings is a heated topic for decades. The discussion on using animals and performing experiments on animals is a common topic on debates but none of them given the proven results if the animals should be used or not for the human benefits. I support the statement that animals should not be used for the benefit of human beings without the evidence that the animals don’t suffer in any way.
Firstly, animal rights are violated whenever they are used for any research and experiments. Scientists/ medical experts performed experiments on animals for medicines and for other medical purposes. By such kind of experiments, most of the time animal goes through the lot of pain and sometimes it leads to their deaths. As human needs love and support, similarly animals need the love and support from us. Human beings should adopt animals and make them their part of family instead of using their lives for other benefits.
On the other side, many of the renowned brand uses animal species for the designer bags and clothes. These designers are earning a hefty amount for such kind of designer apparels and accessories. We humans do not think before buying or using clothes and bags which is made up of animal skins instead human beings are ready to pay huge amount for these fashion materials.
To conclude the above, human beings should not use animals for medical experiment, researches and other benefits which is harmful for animals. We human beings should aware of animal rights and should support the animal welfare in order to decrease the animal suffering.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, similarly, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9557195572 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40223952917 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49815498155 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5011459103 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466656235918 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203660352491 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127160719453 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319451774192 0.151304729494 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111088614311 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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