Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Health is an asset to the economy as it ensures a productive human resource of the country. Health services should be free in the country as it will be beneficial for the residents and for the development of the nation. However, the advance medical care will be expensive and should be charged as it will be a burden on the government. I shall be discussing both the aspects in the below paragraphs.
To be begin with, providing free health care to the people will impact on the economic stability of the country. Nowadays, people of each age groups are focusing on their health and prefers going for regular health check-up. For instance, there are lot of people who cannot afford the fees of regular medical check-up due to which they are unable diagnose the serious disease at the early stage. This allows people to work in a peaceful mind and thus have more productivity. Hence, healthy living results into progress of the country.
I cannot deny that advance treatments which are costly cannot be provided for free as government has invested a lot of money in such technologies. Certain services which needs specialized treatments is difficult for the country to provide it free of cost as it will be burden on the government‘s healthcare budget. This might even result into a huge tax burdens on the citizens and effect the country’s economy.
Taking everything into consideration, providing health care for free is a great relief for citizens and has great advantages. However, it can only be sustained to a certain extent and not all the medical facilities can be given for free
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs specialized" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'specializing' or 'to be specialized'.
Suggestion: specializing; to be specialized
...hnologies. Certain services which needs specialized treatments is difficult for the country...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
Suggestion: frees
...difficult for the country to provide it free of cost as it will be burden on the gov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90441176471 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81454414373 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.215437768 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206838377259 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757456310469 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471856031829 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130726727248 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309829245565 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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