It is argued that people across the world, regardless of adults or children, should be working at home because of the cheaper and accessible technologies nowadays. In my opinion, this development has both beneficial and negative impacts in certain cases.
The first factor leading to the increasing number of working at home trend all over the world is the outbreak of the covid-19 pandemic, which is unable workers and students to gather with a huge number. Besides, the rapid development of high-end technology offers citizens multiple smart devices that allow them to connect at once with ease. It is without dispute that this development helps to resolve many problems including the standard of living and the number of accessible technology.
However, there are a number of negative effects arising from this development on both society and individuals. From an individual perspective, a great number of young students easily get lost during online class due to temptation on the Internet or surroundings; therefore, it dramatically decreases their intense concentrations, then leads to insufficient online courses. On a societal level, it is hard for employers to control their employees, and motivate them to work better. As a consequence, the whole chain of the process might get delayed which deeply affects the growth rate in a company.
In conclusion, thanks to the high-end technology these days, it offers many people to approach smart devices with ease which allows them to work from home regardless of space. However, the potential risks emerging from the Internet and the lack of real-life interactions could lead to the downfall results on both society and individuals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30597014925 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90550671281 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9050385847 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180227939111 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676199801559 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575096916392 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119041881176 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532828410523 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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