Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world . However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate arts and turn their focus towards Science , technology and business .
What do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
art is an essential part of our culture, which defines the traditional values of our county. But many people are increasingly shifting their attention to practical and business subjects. The thought process of this essay will discuss the main reason behind this? And several measures could be initiated to promote people affection in the arts.
There are a plethora of reasons why people are enticed to technical and business sectors. firstly, it will be easier for a person to find a job with higher wages in these sectors than arts because the world shifted towards the revolution of technology and international commerce and there is an enormous demand for employees working in these areas in contrast to arts. Furthermore, arts have certain forms such as painting, acting and music which need exceptional talent and skills and that suits only a small number of people and undoubtedly many people choose science subjects rather than arts. A research was conducted by Western Governors University that 90% of people who are an artist by profession as shifted their career by enrolling into college for studying science and business subjects and get a well paid job.
To foster an interest of arts in people, the government should start the campaigns to raise the public awareness of arts and sponsored some art exhibitions which create the passion for arts in people and create a favourable environment for art sector to grow. Secondly, the government should offer some subsidy for artists so that financial difficulties are no longer for those who want to work in that field. Lastly, art should make the compulsory subject at schools to encourage students to purse art when they are young. A recent research conducted by Standford university that students who are creative and artist, are better decision makers.
In conclusion, while science, technology and business subjects are gaining public concerns. However, the government should undertake some steps to stimulate people to preference to arts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20061728395 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67762345234 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9678132998 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227311927029 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732906352299 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047532640003 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132831390774 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035744418905 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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