Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the increasing number of threats and robberies, people are facing security issues everywhere if they hide inside the house or they go to the market. The thought process of this essay will discuss the several countermeasures needs to be taken by the government and the citizens to enhance their safety against being an easy target for criminals.
There are several precautions needs to be taken by the local people when they go outside the house. We all know that offender target those persons who wear precious accessories like exorbitant jewellery and watches while travelling outside the house. These items become the eye-catching for the thieves, and the person becomes the victim. Moreover, the person should keep small self-defense weapon like pepper spray and stun gun in their bags for the security purpose, and these weapons will not provide any harm to the offenders. Lastly, people should not go outside in the late evenings because criminals take advantage of nighttime when there is a less crowd on the streets. The crime branch of Jammu conducts a survey that 50% of people who become the victim of criminals who wear costly diamond ornaments when they visit local markets, and this allows criminals for robberies when they are walking alone on the street in the late night.
There are other measures that should be taken into action by the government and people for their safety. First and Foremost, the government should increase the police patrolling in these areas when there is an increase in the number of burglaries, which gives some peace of mind to local people. Secondly, the government should install the CCTV cameras in the city which offers an opportunity to get hold of the criminals and impose severe punishment and penalties This way crime rate will decrease, and people feel safe in the marketplaces. A recent survey conducted in North Carolina that rate of crime reduces by 45% after installing cameras in the crowded places, and state had increased the patrolling police force in the night for the safety of local people.
To sum up, in the world of increasing the crime rate, people should learn not to become a target for criminals by wearing expensive ornaments, and the state government should also increase the police force in the areas where the rate of crime is high for the safety of local people.
Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the increasing number of threats and robberies, people are facing security issues everywhere if they hide inside the house or they go to the market. The thought process of this essay will discuss the several countermeasures needs to be taken by the government and the citizens to enhance their safety against being an easy target for criminals.
There are several precautions needs to be taken by the local people when they go outside the house. We all know that offender target those persons who wear precious accessories like exorbitant jewellery and watches while travelling outside the house. These items become the eye-catching for the thieves, and the person becomes the victim. Moreover, the person should keep small self-defense weapon like pepper spray and stun gun in their bags for the security purpose, and these weapons will not provide any harm to the offenders. Lastly, people should not go outside in the late evenings because criminals take advantage of nighttime when there is a less crowd on the streets. The crime branch of Jammu conducts a survey that 50% of people who become the victim of criminals who wear costly diamond ornaments when they visit local markets, and this allows criminals for robberies when they are walking alone on the street in the late night.
There are other measures that should be taken into action by the government and people for their safety. First and Foremost, the government should increase the police patrolling in these areas when there is an increase in the number of burglaries, which gives some peace of mind to local people. Secondly, the government should install the CCTV cameras in the city which offers an opportunity to get hold of the criminals and impose severe punishment and penalties This way crime rate will decrease, and people feel safe in the marketplaces. A recent survey conducted in North Carolina that rate of crime reduces by 45% after installing cameras in the crowded places, and state had increased the patrolling police force in the night for the safety of local people.
To sum up, in the world of increasing the crime rate, people should learn not to become a target for criminals by wearing expensive ornaments, and the state government should also increase the police force in the areas where the rate of crime is high for the safety of local people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d impose severe punishment and penalties this way crime rate will decrease, and p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93450881612 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46865521623 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48362720403 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6325844718 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.692307692 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5384615385 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111542791049 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468164163033 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212503764686 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730424654899 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266361897121 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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