Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A couple of society's sectors are feeling unsecured going out timorous to find a thief on their way, however, robberies occur even being at home. I am strongly convinced that folks should use personal and external security schemes. The aim of this essay is to identify the most convenient way that the community could protect its own safety.
Noise is the most common way to repel a robber attack, due to thieves always avoid to be identified on the crime scene, and that is easily demonstrable by the huge alarms from the big places' security systems, for example, companies, casinos or museums, where landlords or owners need to protect their property. Beyond the security guards, the noise of alert encourages the thieves to run away. Furthermore, this is no the only resource people should use to protect their self.
While they activate the alarm method as the first step, it has to exist a second reaction, and it should be the notification to the police or local security company, because, these are expert groups in protecting people and property against any violent treats or robber attacks, for Instance, numerous cases of bank treats have been avoided or solved by police, just at the push of panic button by a bank employee. Definitely, help from a security group or police is one of the aims people should use when robberies happen.
Evidently, robberies have shown up during human history, but, the society must count on contingency plans to mitigate this kind inconvenient that nowadays affect substantially to the community, counting on that, people should have to carry whistles or panic alarms on them if they are going on the street or alarm systems in places, in addition, and to complement this protocol, people have to notify to the police in the shortest time term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...community could protect its own safety. noise is the most common way to repel a ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Noise
...ty could protect its own safety. noise is the most common way to repel a robbe...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid being'.
Suggestion: avoid being
... a robber attack, due to thieves always avoid to be identified on the crime scene, and that...
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Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ieves to run away. Furthermore, this is no the only resource people should use to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94719471947 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55512480464 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.183037314 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.555555556 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13308853583 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606910189257 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316507994104 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079965004507 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263675573268 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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