Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is true that a growing number of people are scared of robbery and thefts while on streets but there are also many instances of housebreaking and burglary. Few measures a person can take to avoid such thefts are setting an alarm system,having a pet dog. Cops can also take few steps to avoid such incidents by increasing their patrolling.
The breaking and entering of the houses can be avoided by setting up of alarm systems which alert the house owner when someone try to break the security of the house. Setting up of alarm system will also make the house secure even when the person is outside for longer periods of time.People can also have a pet dog which will alert the owner when some unfamiliar person try to break into the house. It's not just the houses even the cases of shoplifting can to be curb to an extent by installing CCTV cameras in the shops.
The government and the cops can also take few measures to avoid such crimes. The Cops can increase the time of patrolling in the areas where there is increase in the number of burglary and shoplifting crimes. The government can install the cameras in the areas where such crimes are on high and also impose high penalities and punishments on the criminals to avoid thefts and robberies.
In conclusion, the government and the individuals should collectively take measures to avoid street and house robberies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , having
... such thefts are setting an alarm system,having a pet dog. Cops can also take few steps...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...hich alert the house owner when someone try to break the security of the house. Set...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...n is outside for longer periods of time.People can also have a pet dog which will aler...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...when some unfamiliar person try to break into the house. Its not just the houses ...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ber of burglary and shoplifting crimes. The government can install the cameras in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71900826446 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56127689537 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45867768595 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5325158541 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893610140721 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387575456499 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255431860193 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477244674273 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036042197167 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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