Nowadays congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be the solution, in your opini

Essay topics:

Nowadays congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be the solution, in your opinion?

It is certainly true that heavy traffic has become one of the major problems in large cities. while many thinks that making the roads wider will solve the congestion problem. However, Constructing wider roads may help to an extent, I do not agree that this could completely solve the issue.

One main reason for traffic congestion is narrow roads. These narrow roads sometimes form short-cut to the destination in urban areas. Most people trying to avoid traffic signals present on the main roads take the narrow roads which eventually leads to jams. Suppose if these roads are made wider than the citizens can save time using short routes as well as vehicles will move with the flow without congesting the road. So, constructing the roads with larger width is one of the solution to avoid traffic congestion.

There are many other options to avoid traffic jam problem. One of them is limiting the use of own vehicles and using public transport as much as possible. People travelling to shorter distances can use public transport like bus or train instead of using their own car or bike and adding to the number of vehicles already on road. Firstly, it will make the traffic less on the road. Secondly,we can also mitigate the air and noise pollution, the lesser the number of auto mobiles the lesser the pollution.

In conclusion, building larger roads, use of public transport as much as we can or occasionally are few of the solutions to avoid traffic congestion and jams.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... of the major problems in large cities. while many thinks that making the roads wider...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of the major problems in large cities. while many thinks that making the roads wider...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...e the traffic less on the road. Secondly,we can also mitigate the air and noise pol...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44383231688 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4655292278 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245586570929 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888359718132 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537632965367 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148566782211 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799381078093 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.