In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In many nations, the government are cheering many industries and their businesses to move to the county side. The relocation of firms and their enterprises provide more benefits to companies and community, which outweigh the drawbacks to downsides.
On the one hand, there are some drawbacks with a change of location of factories and their businesses into non – residential areas. firstly, employees need to extend their journey time who are residing in the town, and it will be time-consuming for them to get to their workplace and organizations need to pay for the travelling cost to their workers which will be an additional cost. secondly, both enterprises and their business go into loss, seeing that their product margin is very less because of delivery fees to the downtown areas. As a result, they cannot maximize their profits and goes into bankrupt in the long run. A recent article published in the newspaper that the pharmaceutical company profit margin declined to 9 % after the relocation of their firm to the regional area.
On the other hand, the movement of firms into regional areas has long term advantages to both community and enterprises. firstly, moving factories to rural areas will provide them huge space to expand their production lines, which has a positive impact on the productivity improvements in the long run. secondly, many metropolitan cities are facing a shortage of houses and buildings to accommodate immigrants, so moving the business to rural areas will address the lack of accommodations in modern cities. Thirdly, environmental issues in residential areas such as air, water and soil pollution could be decline by taking these changes. As a result, the physical health of the citizen will improve significantly, and the most important is to protect our environment. For example, North Carolina city has moved all firms to their rural areas, which helps them to accommodate all immigrants.
In conclusion, the movement of industries and business to the countryside are more beneficial for both organizations and local people at large which outweigh their downside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23303834808 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95813347116 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9349907706 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15899326045 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631061703067 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050105025521 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104467419144 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149497481437 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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