Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art?
Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
In todays age of modern world, Art plays an significant part in nations's development. It's also a marker of culture and it's heritage. In my opinion, it is utmost important to imbibe it's significance in the young generation and we should motivate them to learn art. The following essay will discuss about its importance in developement of children and society;
followed by a reasonsed conclusion.
Fisrt, Art always been a important factor to learn about a nation's culture and its people. For instance, Archaelogical department of any county is able to found about it's history through the objects, paintings they found burried in the earth. Todays generation, nowadays get busy in social hangouts and on their smartphones. They should be taught about
their countries culture and it's art. Schools should organise visits to art Meuseums for chidren to help them learn about the evolvement of the society, how things which has been used in the past become obselete and found their place in Meuseums. Moreover, they should be motivate to learn through which they can also contribute in further enhancement.
However, I don't agree with the view, to focus just on art and not learning about other subjects. Though art is an important thing children should learn but it's not the only thing. Other subjects are equally important for the overall growth of the children. Now a days, there are multiple fields through which one can contribute in society. For example,
a person can become banker by which he can contribute towards financial growth, a doctor who can cure diseases, and others.
To conclude, Art is an important aspect for any culture and one should be very well aware about it but focusing just on art is not the solution for its futuristic development. Children should be motivated and taught about various things in schools and the decision to choose their career should be left upon them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to art', 'to be'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07886435331 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64194406514 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520504731861 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0963927226 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7058823529 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330212231337 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121610260638 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928026401331 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159685836975 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124022344188 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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