Some Young people are leaving country sides to live in cities and towns leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
In recent years, there has been a trend with young population leaving their native place in search of jobs and better opportunities in big cities often leaving old people on their own. The separation is painful for both the side but deemed necessary for survival. This essay will discuss the problems caused by this exodus, followed by proposed solutions to this problem.
The young generation is constantly on move in search of better opportunities and lifestyles. People are migrating to different cities and countries, leaving behind the elders and often women in the family. This surge of people in the cities beyond its capacity has caused urban areas to be over-crowded. In addition to this, the increased burden has caused infrastructure to crumble and people to jostle for space and opportunities. For people left behind, the struggle is to survive with minimal resources and negligible development. Uttarakhand, in India is one such shining example of this pattern. The hills now bore the abundant state with houses in dilapidated condition.
The solution to this problem lies in developing the countryside and villages at par with cities. The creation of job and education opportunities is the prerogative of the government. People should be trained with vocational courses on horticulture, fisheries and village handicrafts. Moreover, the government should provide them with regular source of income. Along with this, better medical colleges and educational institutions should be opened. If done, this will take burden off the cities while developing the countrysides that would then add to national income.
To conclude, there is an urgent need to tackle this exodus and save both cities and countrysides from deteriorating further. The need is to maintain a balance between both the world while also creating a better living environment. The countrysides need a touch of development so that no man has to leave his family while he ventures into unexplored territory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33757961783 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96790682669 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1270070734 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2105263158 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302266786487 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082899736413 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659537922651 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181773893517 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807600327725 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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