With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today, the internet has united both producers and consumers across the world. With shopping experience going online, people have found a platform to give feedback about their purchases. This essay will discuss both the view; followed by my opinion.
To begin with, Marketing has undergone a paradigm shift with millennials opting for online shopping as a convenient option. With shops and customers going virtual, a platform for reviews and experience has gained momentum. For instance, large e-commerce sites like Flipkart and Amazon display user reviews and experiences to visitors on their platform. This allows people to view feedbacks from customers before making a purchase order and allows customers to share their experience with others. Therefore, the opinion of others, help shape decision on products and services. Moreover, the fear of criticism about a product will help keep a check on sellers, who loot customers either with fraudulent services or damaged product.
However, the problem with online reviews and opinions is that the veracity of the statement cannot be verified. As, the users are hidden behind their online username and have no physical identity, making it difficult to trust random people. Apart from this, there are companies that create fake reviews for them using fake online entities. For Instance, a recent investigation on the rising number of followers of a political party in India, revealed that most of the users were actually the bots and were propagated to make the party famous with large number of likes and comments on their post. Hence, online reviews sometimes spread confusion and distrust among the viewers.
In my opinion, I believe that with services and shopping going online, online reviews and ratings help customers in making a better shopping decision. For instance, while purchasing the new handset, I scrolled through a large number of reviews from experts and users and finally bought the handset that has an almost same review on every site. Therefore, while online shopping is fast catching on, online reviews will provide voice to the customers who either want to give warning or recommendations from their own experience.
To conclude, sharing views about services and products on the internet is the fastest way to make your opinion heard. This will not only help to put pressure on online sellers to sell genuine products but will guide prospective customers to make a wise decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2806122449 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55649285475 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4770953886 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.947368421 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18142804727 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702771377149 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078412448403 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131602054019 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810974918947 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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