With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With advancement of technology, internet has become revolution in the way of doing shopping. Some people believe that posted comments on online sites may mislead the customers but others opine that it posted remarks and ratings are beneficial at the user-end. According to my perception it is power to share valuable consumer experience and feedback.
On the one hand, some individuals think that online feedback and rating systems mislead the consumer because it disseminating the false image of the products. The competitors of esteemed organizations portray the negative publicity to minimize the reputation of established enterprises, which will help improve the scope of merchandise in the market. For instance, Coca cola a renowned company, which dragged many times in the news related to unhygienic conditions and low quality raw materials, but it cannot proved by any authority. Unfortunately, the manufactures have lost some percentage of consumer’s faith and sale.
On the other hand, supports of freedom claim that it enables people to share honest views and opinions. Sharing genuine feedback and rating is better insights for products; it not merely improves the company’s reputation but also helps in building trust in brands. To illustrate, the popular e-commerce website amazon.com has recently published on their blog that 80 percent of their customers buy the products from their portal by going through verified reviews and ratings. Thus honest opinion about any product is decisive factor for consumer to buy the product. In addition to, online platforms help to direct deal with the management if not addressed by the stockiest. Issues rise publically and resolved them instantly in the effective manner.
To conclude, in my prospective, genuine feedback and ratings on products are widely accepted by customers, although sometimes it mislead by portray the false or fake comments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55593220339 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96050804277 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8915359506 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0756863719829 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270331267777 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343316379918 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387112339471 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339952639315 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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