The education a child receives at home from having parents who are positive role models is more important than the academic education a child receives at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In the modernised era, Education has always played a vital role. Many people opine that teaching from parents is more pivotal than academic education that children learn from school. I disagree with this statement and I shall focus on the 2 reasons to support my opinion.
One of the factors that supports this idea is preparation. Every school already prepares the necessary subjects for students. For example, Students will learn in all field which is important and also have to use it in the future life for their university and some kinds of occupation. Whereas, In the house some parents will teach only about how to behave as a good person in the society which is require but sometime, it's useless because school is the place that is social simulation and they build up the rules already. If children concern only about their behaviour, they will miss the opportunities to success. Thus, this is one of the reason why academic education is more essential than education from parents.
Another point to consider is Opportunity. Students will offer a better chances that is provide from school rather than home. For instance, teachers who teach in academic skill are experts in their own field which can help student to understand the subject easier and sometimes, this could lead to high rank university which could change whole of their life. If students less concern about academic education, they will be an unqualify person that lose their good occasion to build up brighter future. Therefore, This is the common reason why it should be more pivotal.
Having analysed the issued, it is clear that academic education is very useful and important than parents teaching. It is no doubt that why many fathers and mothers try to let their student study a lot.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...s a good person in the society which is require but sometime, its useless because schoo...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...nts will offer a better chances that is provide from school rather than home. For insta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94966442953 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46080257225 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7690200178 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192770178419 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691073182633 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814230105556 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139607010535 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562812810656 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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