The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crimes.
Why do you think that is?
Do you think the news should be a balance of both good news and bad news?
News has become ubiquitous in today’s world. Technology advancement has made it possible to fosters to spread the news within a minute or less. The conundrum is most of the media broadcasting negatives news such as social wars, natural calamities, felony and mishaps. In my opinion, it is important to highlight the bad news but positive news should be given equal importance.
To begin with,news helps to human society to learn about happening in and around in the world, it is the best way to acquire knowledge about the current affairs of the globe. It plays an major role in shape up the prospective of the society but most of the news reporting channels dedicate most of their time on negative telecast as compare to positive ones. To illustrate, an athlete won a gold medal in common wealth games, media neglect this event. Instead they gave more coverage to political scandal which is less important. This is probably because bad news shocks people and grab all attention more easily.
In my perception, news channels should tackle all the issues from corrupt government to successful charity services. Tragic stories are to be remind us about more responsibilities, it get us motivated to change the better world. As the same way good news give the new hope and boost the confidence level. Bringing readers attention towards positive news not merely make them feel optimistic and to encourage them to do in right direction.
To summarize, both good and bad news are should be given equal importance, it help to shape up people’s prospective and aid them to stay safe and informed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02230483271 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7691848807 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6883027379 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374103341942 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124807635335 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934398350555 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236477350683 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918731945336 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.