Violence in media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, media plays an important part in human life from a small child to elderly person. people get information, knowledge and pleasure from media. Compared to traditional media people spend more time on high tech electronic media such as television, internet and social media. Apart from advantages associated with media there are some drawbacks. Broadcasting the violent activities by the media incites the brutality among the people. this assay total agree with the statement because brutal videos telecasted have negative impact on the minds of young ones and some terror outfits promote the violence by using social media among the masses.
To begin with, young people spend approximately 5-6 hours of time on watching videos on television such as movies and cartoons. most of movies todays have physical violence, brutal murder,communal riots and rape. young masses believe that brutality shown in movies is heroic and they start to imitate them blindly. Viewers are influenced when they watch actors perform violent activities on screen. As a result, young ones are exposed to crime and brutality at a very young age and start believing that it is alright to resort the violence, if the need arises. this can be illustrated by an increase in the number of incidences of physical abuse among the children. Recently, a sixth class student studying in a very reputed school in Delhi murdered his junior because later did not give him seat in school bus.
Furthermore, many terror groups utilize social media to float videos of mass killings, people getting slaughtered in the name of the religion, motivate to create unrest among individuals and divide them based on religion. social media such as Whatsapp and Facebook have features that allow to users to communicate and spread violation without any censorship. Issues like religious intolerance and racial discrimination often hurt individual sentiments. For instance, one of the most dreaded terror outfits, ISIS, targets people from Muslim community and instills ill will in their minds for other religions and motivates them to get indulged in violent activities.
To summarize, media exposes young children to barbarity at tender age and spread communal violence by brainwash.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, still, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44788732394 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68807678355 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6994513 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.444444444 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126786556401 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390720293473 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520754922147 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906293776123 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782847975757 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.