Completing university education thought by some people to the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
It is considered by some people that university degree is the key to securing a good job whereas others think that it is better to having experience and skills. In my perception, having university education is necessary for academic jobs while experience and soft skills are beneficial for business.
On the one hand, many individuals believe that it is easier to get a good job if they are university graduate with good degree. The tertiary education puts people one step ahead from the others who do not have educational qualifications. The competition to enroll the name in university, the number of graduates increase every year, shows the significant value of the level of education for the people’s future work opportunities.
On the other hand, many people considered having work experience and soft skills such as leadership skill and other interpersonal skills, also throw balance in favour of the applicant. For many positions there are overwhelming numbers of applicants having relevant experience in that line of work or having acquired useful soft skills that can be valuable for company, can puts one ahead of the game when applying for a position.
Finally, in my opinion, whether having academic degree or skills and experience, depends upon the position being applied for. For instance, in law, medicine or teaching, it is impossible to consider position without educational background. In contrast, in business, it would be more important for a candidate have soft skills and experience in that line of business so they can step into training without any training and be immediate to company benefit.
In conclusion, to getting a good job relevant background is mandatory either education or experience depending on the type of work and field. People should make sure they attain necessary skills and degrees before applying the job in order to get the success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 374, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'put'
Suggestion: put
...s that can be valuable for company, can puts one ahead of the game when applying for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25573770492 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91995515974 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518032786885 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3460446795 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.583333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276414849529 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118701982206 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639122253856 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174877382026 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582267658548 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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