Poor students or students who come from rural areas often find it is difficult to get access to the university education, so some people think universities should make it easier for them to study at.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It is believed that the students from the low income family background and remote areas find some difficulties to get enroll in graduate and post graduate programs. It is suggested that colleges and universities should be provide special pathway for them. To a certain extent, I would agree with the statement, but there are some additional requirements which must have to fulfill.
To begin with, many students come from low family class and live in remote area get difficulty to get enroll in university due to low level of secondary education. The underprivileged people enroll their names in low quality school, where taught by junior teachers who are still struggling to gain experience. As a result, the learners from rural area are unable to compete with other students when they are participating in registration process while entering in universities. It is suggested that there should be allocated seats and provide some subsidy to the students with low poverty line and remote area.
Furthermore, despite the special pathway, there should be consider entrance test and academic background to get admission in tertiary education. Universities ensure that the learners have potential and eagerness towards the studies with good sores in secondary education so that allocated seats and subsidy would not waste. In addition to, well educated people act as catalyst to enrich the economy of country. Education is building block to uplift the society. To illustrate, Hindustan times conducted a survey, in which economy rate is directly proportional to literacy rate. Hence, post secondary education leads to lucrative jobs whereas elementary education only secures menial jobs.
To summarize, it is considered that low economy students who come from remote area is necessary to get enroll in post secondary education by taking specific measures, because education is essential tool in boost the economy of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, still, well, whereas, while, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42244224422 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83559624079 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9260162798 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24576465209 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798116552456 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579485012795 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153496271139 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632228104669 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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