These days, many people like to be superstars. Although the fame has advantages such as wealth and the influence on the society, it also has disadvantages such as the lack of personal space and fans follow them everywhere. I strongly believe that the benefits of being a celebrity far outweigh the problems and over the course of this essay will provide reasons for this viewpoint.
First of all, the famous person has a big wealth that provides a secure future for them. This is clearly shown in the Egyptian society where movie stars take millions of pound to participate in movie or advert. In addition, football players take the highest salaries than other jobs. This illustrates the idea that being famous leads to earn a lot of money more than anyone else does.
Furthermore, superstars have the opportunity to influence on millions of people. Any star has many fans who follow his fashion and like to know what is his opinion about many issues in the community. Also, they can motivate and inspire fans and the general public. For instance, the celebrities can collect donations for the services that charities provide to poor people. Thus, it is evident how celebrities can help in the improvement of the society.
On the other hand, celebrity usually does not have a personal space because fans follow him. They want to take a picture and talk with him then share it on social media. For example, singers or movie stars have many problems in doing their hobbies such as walking in streets, shopping, relaxing on the beach or eating in public restaurants. Therefore, they may travel to a foreign country for doing their hobbies.
To conclude, it seems that there are several benefits to being a celebrity. After analyzing how fame makes a person rich and a role model for many. No wonder if we say that being famous is a big dream for many people around us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7962962963 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49891761358 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4252363213 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7894736842 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218962541996 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587988336156 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483540553477 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117416143772 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422306491232 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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